高中英语《新高考读后续写指导 --- 叙述与描写》公开课优秀课件（经典、完美、值得收藏）.pptx

Welcome!;Narration and Description;A piggy is jumping under an apple tree.; 叙述和描写都是记叙性文章的主要表达方式。 叙述(narration)是将事情的前后经过记录下来，主要用来交代人物活动 和事件经过，开展情节。 描写(description)则指通过各个感官的细节描述，用生动形象的语言把 人物、景物的状态具体地描绘出来。 ;【试一试】阅读以下句子，分辨他们是描写还是叙述 1) Her moistened eyes betrayed her unconcerned posture. 2) With tears streaming down her face, words failed her. 3) She would cry, kick and lie on the floor drumming with tears. 4) She was crying when she heard the terrible news. 5) She rode the rest of the way home wearing a Mona Lisa smile of peace and grace. 6) As I stand it back, a huge smile spreads across her face, which lights up my gloomy afternoon. 7) I was very angry when I got the news.; 叙述和描写都是记叙性文章的主要表达方式。 叙述(narration)是将事情的前后经过记录下来，主要用来交代人物活动 和事件经过，开展情节。 描写(description)则指通过各个感官的细节描述，用生动形象的语言把 人物、景物的状态具体地描绘出来。 一篇动人心弦的记叙文离不开生动形象的描写，一篇恰当的读后续写也离不开适当的描写。在读后续写中，要进行恰当的细节描写，选取典型或关键情节、人物与场面辅以对比等修辞技巧进行细节刻画，用具体的细节描写再现自然景色、事物情状，人物形貌及内心世界。 【存在问题】没有描写的概念，将情节简单描述后即为完成任务，混淆描写与叙述；;【学生习作分析】The next day, I was on my way to visit her. And I could see the particular buildings she had told me and took some photos. As I reached the hospice, the doctor in charge told me that she was healthy and relaxed and where she was. When I went into her room, I found she was sleeping gently, so I put the photos and fresh fruits and flowers on her desk. Saying nothing, I left a note with my phone number and went out of the hospice. Then I kept on driving a taxi to make a living and spreading my love to others.;【学生习作分析】The next day, I was on my way to visit her. Along the way, I took photos of every particular building, hoping she would be happy in her remaining life. To my relief, she was there. The moment she caught sight of me, her eyes began to fill with excitement, like the bright in the breaking down, with a radiation of joy. I spent a whole afternoon there and when I was about to leave, she gave me a hug like that (one) I had given to her, saying nothing. The warm smile on he