商务英语写作教程 第四版 课件 10 Claim and adjustment letters.ppt
Chapter10 ClaimandAdjustmentletters
ClaimlettersAclaimorcomplaintletterisarequestforanadjustment.Makingcomplaintsisneverapleasantbusiness,butwhenacomplaintisnecessaryitshouldbemadewithtactandrestraintifitisnottoimpairfuturebusinessrelations.Besuretheclaimisaccurateandreasonable.
StructureofClaimlettersBeginwithafactualdescriptionoftheproblem.Stateclearlyyourreasonsforcomplaining,askforexplanationandexplainwhatadjustmentyouseek.Refertotheinconveniencecausedandsuggesthowmatterscouldbeputright.Concludebyexpressingconfidenceintheexpectationofafavourableandhelpfulreply.
EXAMPLESDearMr.Ferguson:Subject:ColorfadingofyourKota-Tuffcarpeting,yourinvoice3147datedJanuary3,2023TheKota-TuffcarpetingyouinstalledforuslastJanuaryhasfadedbadlyandisaneyesoreinourhotelpoolarea.Asyoucanseeintheenclosedphotograph,theoriginalforestgreencolornowisspottedwithringsofvaryingshadesofwhiteandgreen.Thespottingisespeciallyheavyinareasadjacenttothepool.Probablywaterhascausedthedamage.Butyourwrittenwarrantysaysthatthecolorwill“withstandtheeffectsofsunandwater.”
Astheproductclearlyhasnotliveduptothewarranty,weaskthatyoureplacetheKota-Tuffwithamoresuitablecarpeting.Ifyouareunabletofindasatisfactorycarpeting,werequestarefundofthefullpurchaseprice,includinginstallation.Iwillappreciateyourusualpromptnessincorrectingthisproblem.Sincerely,LuellaE.DabbsManager
AdjustmentLettersAnadjustmentisaremedytoaclaimproblem.Handlingcomplaintlettersisaverysensitivearea,andneedstobemanagedwithcare.Whateveryoudo,don’trushintowritingaresponse,andneverattackthecustomerformakingthecomplaintinthefirstplace.Iftheclaimsarenotwellhandledandtheproblemsthatgiverisetotheclaimsa