第七课饼图报告.doc
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雅思饼状图:
特点:静态数据(百分比或数字)
除了最大最小的,还有互相成倍的,一样的
写作思路:以C8 p. 53题目为例
先审题,再看图
几张饼,几种馅
哪个馅儿多,哪个馅儿少
数字,比率
1. 归纳最大值:三个饼图中的最大值集于一身:Teachers’ salaries
2. 归纳最小值:三个饼图中的最小值集于一身:Insurance
注意:此题目中的极值点(最大值和最小值)相当集中,为我们做统一归纳提供了便利。对比C7 p. 101的饼状图,我们不难发现该题目中极值点较为分散,需要分类归纳。
3.分析变化趋势 (增长趋势,下降趋势,波动趋势):此题目中的变化趋势项目也很集中,可以做统一归纳,而C7 p. 101饼状图的变化趋势需要进行分类归纳。
a.呈现增长趋势的项目:Insurance
注意:对于Insurance的投入既是最小值,又呈现持续增长趋势,论述中可以使用转折关系衔接过渡(参看下文中的范文分解示例)。
b.呈现下降趋势的项目:Other workers’ salaries
c.呈现波动趋势的项目:Resources, Furniture and equipment
下面是范文示例及步骤分解(文中黑体字部分为模板句型,仅供参考):
第一段:导论:概述背景信息+概述整体变化趋势
The pie charts make a comparison among three sample years in terms of the changes in annual expenditure on certain items by a particular British school. They exhibit that the figures vary widely from year to year.
第二段:主体:关键特征
1.导入语“如图所示”As indicated in the charts,
2.描述最大值: the annual expense on Teachers’ salaries was at the highest point across the three sample years, peaking at 40%, 50% and 45% respectively.
3.描述最小值:In contrary, the smallest expenditure occurred in Insurance throughout the three years, which hit bottom at 2%, 3% and 8% accordingly.
4. 对于Insurance 的投入既是最小值,同时又呈现持续增长趋势,因此可以使用转折关系将二者串联起来:
Despite the fact that the spending on Insurance was at the lowest level, it is worthwhile to note that it exhibited a trend of continuous rise from the year 1981 to 2001.
5.继续描述呈现持续下降趋势的项目:By contrast, the expenditure on Other workers’ salaries presented a tendency of remarkable decline, which was from 28% in the year 1981 to 22% in 1991 and, ultimately, to 15% in 2001.
第三段:归纳总结:归纳总结或者查漏补缺
6.可以在这段中简要描述对于其它项目投入的变化趋势:
From the figures demonstrated above, it is safe to draw a conclusion that the expenditure on Resources and Furniture and equipment indicated a trend of gradual fluctuation overall.
这是饼状图中整体+局部的一种模式,
再如:The following two pie charts illustrate the energy use in the U.S.A.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given in the pie charts bel
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