四级零基础写作-学生.docx

高分作文要素1 结构清晰2 语言丰富3内容充实4 出现亮点写作过程（一）1 第一步 第二步 Interview is goodFake commodities 第三步 2 （二）1任务： 2 成功语言体现的五个方面：（1）（2）（3）（4）（5）3 选词的适切性（1）（2）结构要求1引言段：表明文章话题，吸引读者兴趣，暗示正文内容用数字：Nowadays tens of thousands university students are graduated from school, and they all want to be successful in this modern world. 用问题：Do you know any university studentswho does not want to succeed in the society? What does it take for them to succeed in the modern society?用引语：“Success comes not only from perspiration and inspiration, but also from sati factory performance in interview.” commented Dr Kenly in his book.开门见山式In the modern society, almost all university students look forward to success驳论式As the modern society puts more emphasis on personal difference and personal values, it provides more opportunities for students to seek success. However, the fact is that not everyone can succeed. Success calls for certain opportunities, but more importantly, it calls for many personal qualities.2 正文段的写法：（1）第一部分：（2）第二部分：（3）第三部分：3 结论段的写法（1）总结的写法（2）评论的写法构思文章（一）（二）1 expert testimony2 statistics3 example4 personalexperience5 logic and reasoning6 known facts 7 analogy例1主题句：Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation .1 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.Dr. David from Harvard university declared after a nationwide survey “Americans get less sleep than they used to.”2 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.When in college, I used to sleep about nine hours every day, but now I can sleep for six hours if I want to finish my job on time, I usually feel tired at work.3 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.It’s well known that people around us consider sleep the least important item on their list if they faced with heavy pressure from work, family or friends.4 Lack of sleep has become an epidemic in the nation.From the poll of 18th and 19th ,sleep scientists have concluded that the average person used to sleep about 9.5 hours at night, By 1950s and 19