2019届高考英语一轮复习 第三部分 写作导练 第16讲 巧记妙叙 难以忘记-如何写话题类记叙文课件 外研版.ppt

* 第16讲　巧记妙叙,难以忘记——如何写话题类记叙文 一、魔法导航 话题类记叙文要注意以下几点: 第一,掌握记叙文的“六要素”。一般按照事件发展的时间顺序来讲述,先交代事件发生的时间、地点以及事件所涉及的人物,然后叙述事件发生的原因、发展经过,最后交代结果。但有时也采取插叙和倒叙的手法。 第二,首先确定时间立足点,并以此确定时态。报道、日记或故事类记叙文通常是记录过去发生的事情,因此经常采用一般过去时;叙述当前的事情、自然或社会现象则用一般现在时。 第三,从谋篇布局角度讲,该类文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题;第二段讲述过程;第三段说明结果或发表感慨。 二、常用句式 (1)One morning/day.../Last week/Saturday.../On a winter day.../This morning.../It was June 20,2010.../On May 4,2010... (2)...was doing sth.when suddenly.../As soon as...+主句/When...+主句/Before I could...+主句. (3)As/Because/Since...+主句. (4)After some time.../After a while.../A few minutes later.../A moment later.../ Then... (5)Some were doing...some were doing...and/while others were doing... (6)...just then.../At that moment.../Hardly had...when... (7)And.../So.../Therefore.../As a result.../For that… 三、典题示例 真题在线 一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。 1.家庭; 2.工作; 3.业余生活。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好。 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. ???? ???? ???? 审题谋篇 阅卷现场 考场作文: I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.In ten years,I will have my own family,①lead a happy life.As for my job,I will build up my own business.Not only will it ②helps me make a living,but it will also contribute to the development of the society.When I have free time,I will take ③regularly exercise and become a volunteer to help the elderly people.It is useful for improving my life quality.In brief,I will spare no effort to make my future life meaningful. 文章提升: 1.修改错误: 1)lead在此处应作非谓语动词,与主语I为主动关系,故应将①lead改为leading。 2)在not only引起的倒装句型中助动词will提前,主语后动词需用动词原形,故应将②helps改为help。 3)修饰名词需用形容词,故将③regularly改为regular。 2.提升建议: 将画线部分改为非谓语动词作状语的形式: When having free time 参考范文: I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will h