高考英语复习读后续写练习:雪中邂逅,开启纽约温暖之旅.pptx
高考英语读后续写语篇练习雪中邂逅,开启纽约温暖之旅1
题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2
Part1题目呈现3
续写原文ItwasmyfirstwinterinNewYork,andthecitywascoveredinathickblanketofsnow.IdecidedtoembracetheextremelycoldweatherbyvisitingCentralParktoseeittransformedbythewinter’stouch.AsIwalkedthroughthepark,thefreshsnowcrunchedundermyboots,whichsoundedlikeapieceofcheerfulmusic,andIcouldseefamiliesenjoyingskiingdownthesmallhills,fulloffunandlaughter.Ifeltamixtureofexcitementandhomesickness,missingmyhometown’swarmerwintersyetthrilledbythenewexperiencesaheadofme.4
续写原文ItwasonthatverydaythatImetAlex,afreelance(自由职业的)photographer.Whilewanderingintheworldoficeandsnow,Inoticedonethatcapturedthewinterscenes,andhiscamerawasfocusedonagroupofchildrenbuildingahugesnowman,whichstimulatedmycuriosity.IwalkedtowardshimandstruckupaconversationwithhimaboutphotographyandthemagicofNewYorkinwinter.Heofferedtosharesometipsandshowmesomeofhisfavoriteshotsandimages.Inspiredbyhisworksandpassion,Iwaswonderingandaskedifhewouldmindgivingmeaquickphotographylessonrightthereinthepark.5
续写原文Alexagreedreadilyandenthusiastically,invitingmetojoinhim,andwespentthenexthourexperimentingwithdifferentsettingsonmycamera.Devotedtothiscommunicationandlearning,Ifeltthattimepassedquickly.Asthesunbegantoset,castingagoldenglowoverthesnow,wecapturedsomebeautifulshotswhileenjoyingthemagnificentscenehere.Feelinggratefulfortheimpromptu(即兴的)lesson,Ithankedhimandstartedtoheadhome,filledwithjoyandasenseofsatisfaction.AsIwalkeddownthewayoutofthepark,IrealizedIhadleftmyglovesnexttowherewehadbeenstanding.6
段首句Paragraph1:IturnedbacktofindthemandsawAlexwavingtheminhishand.Paragraph2:Afewdayslater,IwenttothenursinghousewithAlex.7
Part2题目分析8