高考英语复习读后续写练习：意外烧伤后的温暖回访与延续 .pptx

高考英语读后续写语篇练习意外烧伤后的温暖回访与延续1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文Inthesummerof2005,KathrynFumie,havingjustfinishedherfreshmanyearofcollege,waslivinginanapartmentandlearningtocook.Oneday,shedecidedtomakesouponthestove.Asthesoupgentlycookedonthestove,Fumiewenttocheckonit.Inamomentofdistraction,sheaccidentallyknockedthepotover,causingtheboilingsouptosplashontoherhand.Thepainwasimmediateandunbearable,andshequicklyrealizedshehadseverelyburnedherskin.4

续写原文Herclassmate,whowasnearby,sawtheaccidentandquicklycalledforanambulance.Withinminutes,theambulancearrived,andanEMT(急救医疗医生),wearingamask,begantoassisther.TheEMThelpedFumiestaycalmduringthe45-minutedrivetothehospital,despitehercontinuouslyaskingforsomealleviationofherpain.“Couldyoudosomethingtoeasemypain,please?CouldIhaveacoldpack?”Fumieaskedrepeatedly.TheEMTexplainedgentlybutfirmlythathecouldn’tgiveheracoldpackbecauseextremecoldmightcausefurtherdamagetoheralreadyinjuredskin.Shehadtotoleratethepainuntiltheyreachedtheburnunit.5

续写原文Atthehospital,thedoctortreatinghertookacompassionate(有同情心的)approach.Hetalkedtoherthroughoutthetreatmentprocesstohelpdistractherfromthepain.Theychattedaboutvarioustopics,includingherpart-timejobatafactory,whichhelpedtotakehermindoffherinjuries.Mostimportantly,thedoctormadeherknowthatshewasgoingtobeokay.“Hehadanamazingvoice,andjustwassocalm.HemadesurethatIgottherighttreatment,”Fumieremembered.Thedoctor’sprofessionalandempatheticdemeanormadeasignificantdifferenceinherexperience.Fumiewasinhospitalforfourandahalfdays,receivingexcellentcare.Twomonthslater,fullyrecovered,shereturnedtoherpart-timejobasareceptionistatthefactory.However,thestorydidn’tstophere.6

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