基础写作基本功训练.ppt

1. I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school. （ 强调句 ） It was when I entered … that I realized … 2. We can live a happy life only by this means.（倒装句） Only by this means can we live a … 3. He fell asleep. The lights were still on.（with结构） He fell asleep with the lights still on. 4. When I heard that, I was much moved. （非谓语动词） Hearing that, I was much moved. 5. They carried out a survey among 260 students.（ 被动语态 ） A survey was carried out among 260 students. 6. It was getting dark. And it began to rain. （插入语） It was getting dark. What’s worse, it began to rain. 1、我回到家了，才发现我把书包留在操场上了。 It was not until I arrived at home that I found I had left my bag on the playground. 2、他告诉我真相了我才意识到我误解他了。 Only when he told me the truth did I realize that I had misunderstood him. 3、他思想负担很重，感到极大的压力。 With heavy burdens on mind, he felt greatly stressed. 4、穿着得当，你会更可能给老板留下好印象。 Dressed in a proper way, you’re more likely to leave a good impression on the boss. 写作中复合句常见的错误 ① Kate is a new student. ② She comes from a northern province. ③ She speaks a dialect. ④ We find it hard to understand her dialect. 第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。 第二句: 1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。 连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students’ composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. ___________ they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters. 一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。 乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。 李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。 李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。 突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。 乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。 李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。 A beggar One day, when Mr. Li hurried on his way to work, a beggar on the roadside was asking for money, but Mr. Li paid no attention on him. As a result, the beggar got angry and stuck out his walking stick, which almost tripped Mr. Li ov