如何达到简练如何达到简练.doc

如何达到简练 简练，就是简明精练，即文字干净利落，言简意赅，这是英语写作的基本要如在我们说话、写文章时， 1 去冗赘 语言要简洁，这并不是说都要写简短的句子，而不能写长句，也不是要避 下面各组中，A句是冗赘B句是修改后的句子。 A． The nature of his statement was not in accordance with the facts． B． Hi statement was not true． Whenever anyone called for someone to help him do some certain things，Jim was always the first to volunteer and lend his help for the cause． B． Whenever anyone called for help，Jim was always the first to volunteer． She was confronted with two courses of action and neither seemed satisfactory． B． She was in a dilemma． A． I am very much interested in the fundraising drive．One of the reasons why Im interested is that I enjoy helping other people． I am very much interested in the fund-raising drive because I enjoy helping other people． A． I a hopeful that we can come to some agreement． B．I hope that we can agree． The thing we had to decide on next was in what place we would be able to give our performance and in what fashion we would sell the tickets． The next thing for us to decide on was where to give our performance and how to sell the tickets． There are two men who are on duty．B．Two men are on duty． 2忌重复 要避免无谓的重复，意思相同的词的重复在语法上被视为错句。在下面 Repeat(again)what you have said． On hearing the encouraging news，he returned(back)to his native land． The distant explosion was audible(to the ear)． We must master English idioms(well)． My computer table is silver-gray(in color)． It is a(true)fact that the generation gap has been widening in recent years. The cause of my failure was(on account of) neglect of my studies． Your classroom is twice as big as ours(in size)． 要避免无目的地重复同一个词，这种重复不但会使语意嗦，还会使结构 My first job，that is，my first full time job，was a somewhat unusual job．It was unusual both as a first job and as a job for a fourteen-year-old boy．My new job was in a beauty parlor． 这个句子可以这样改写，使之简洁、紧凑、有力： My first full time job was somewhat unusual employment for a fourteen-year-old boy． worked in