六级作文系列 现象解释型.ppt

现象解释型范例 * * Para 1： 首先应总述现象并描述其现状； Nowadays // In recent years // In modern society, 总述现象, (which has(have) been brought into focus // which has(have) aroused great concern). // 现象 has become a serious problem. // What impresses us most today is 现象. 现象表现，现象具体的体现或变化 Moreover // In addition, 进一步描述现象表现或变化. 现象解释型 * Para 2： 在描述了现象之后，然后，分析这种现象的原因相关因 素或带来的影响 [描述影响] Undoubtedly, 该现象has(have) brought a negative effect(influence) on 影响对象. // 该现象 can bring damage to影响对象. // 现象所涉及的主题can benefit a lot from 该现象. Above all, 影响一. For example, 进一步说明影响. What’s more, 影响二. In addition//Besides, 影响三. 现象解释型 * [说明原因] The reasons for this phenomenon are varied. // There are many factors contributing to (influencing)该现象或其相关情况. Among all these reasons (factors), 原因一 plays (play) a critical role. Moreover / /Furthermore // What’s more, 原因二. Besides, 原因三. 现象解释型 * Para 3： 最后，阐述自己对该现象的看法或提出相关建议或希望 [做评价] No doubt//From my point of view, 对该现象做出总体评价. However, 可能存在的问题 // However, it is worth noting that 应该注意的事项. 进一步描述问题或注意事项. All in all // Therefore, 总结全文. 现象解释型 * [提建议] As for me // From my point of view // In my opinion, 对该现象做出整体评价、对现象的发展做出预测或提出建议(, but 指出注意事项/提出建议). For one thing, 评价一/建议一. For another, 评价二/建议二. To conclude // In a word, 总结全文. 现象解释型 * Secondhand Goods 例文讲解 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Secondhand Goods. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 目前购买二手货的人越来越多 分析产生这一现象的原因 3. 二手货交易可能带来的问题 * Secondhand Goods 例文讲解 目前购买二手货的人越来越多 分析产生这一现象的原因 3. 二手货交易可能带来的问题 Para 1: In recent years, secondhand transactions have become quite common (which have been brought into focus/ which have aroused great concern). Para 2: There are many factors contributing to this phenomenon. // The following reasons can account for this phenomenon. Para 3: However, there are also some problems in secondhand goods transactions. * Secondha