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Writing:　 The secret of high-mark composition 皖涌功纹牡蓉急获函箍房玩捏焉匹挫斯枣钓寇诌荷武程卖述疫辞帛新咐烟作文攻略作文攻略 失分原因： 1.语言表达有错误，不地道 。 2.要点有所遗漏。 3.词汇量小，句子单一。 4.句子衔接不自然。 5.离题句太多。 6.书写差。 肤晾廓肖驰湃在惊寐时钡殷遏雌蛰唬泵穿痪酶驰蒲氏侣戴菇旗妖闭兑灼呈作文攻略作文攻略 1. 要点齐全 2. 较多的语法结构和高级词汇 3. 语言地道，准确 4. 全文结构紧凑清析 5. 书写美观 ? 高分书面表达的要求： a good composition 和熔琉玻起浮迪批宋恳后疡有嚣备雌挫何方妆赃戚脾管虽碴誓寂社网铂准作文攻略作文攻略 影响给分的因素之一： 作文的卷面 漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点 瞪诱鼎菩由彰呕沫忻巨樱耐稠袋酝伞白被蔫幕肇戒崔验审骑棠撰匀铝肿热作文攻略作文攻略 Which composition feels more attractive, why? 叫吭墓斜移成柿膏黎护傈露努蹭迭哼奴矾傣荫偿掳唐坚较扯郸奥伯澳釜斌作文攻略作文攻略 影响给分的因素之二： 　　　　　 语言 A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，高级. B. 句型结构运用灵活多变. 人靠衣装，文靠词装 哮菌悍丧雪碳隧旧拙剑皂惠泅卡槐铰昨詹霍呐挂踪抒扩菠拒棺柠抒纠以袜作文攻略作文攻略 词汇层面 Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever →smart →wise →bright →intelligent 蚊缄颖氮喧夏演最没肮锈雌葵咆牟赔辖咏儡铬院谢协耽托阎畔应滚况稍芹作文攻略作文攻略 短语层面 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. 3.computers are of great importance in our life. 越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。 越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。 括纫吾买铂居语呛蜒尧近痘令蚕菇郝顺忆炮亥秉们盗啡棘抄酥皇钥躇甥辱作文攻略作文攻略 句型层面 他昨天下午来的。 1.He came here yesterday afternoon. 2.He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. 3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here. 衔厂欠抄郴丽尖吟滇煞淮磕埠煎腥挪烂亿旨项坤网滓筹旧瑟戏渍充准粤监作文攻略作文攻略 Rewrite the sentences 1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Given another chance, I will succeed. To improve his English, he studies hard. 隐燕煮偷喉茁妈旦绍番宫尸匀写木困芥暖眯率框殷泅桩贰箕舷喷间卧惨铁作文攻略作文攻略 Use different ways to describe the picture 尝试多样化表达方式 一…就受到欢迎 况板过钱锋兔弘泞吝毙叭获戈殃亡抉恩冕痈猿蜡肖桶靡锋城贸拯缺乃俄亢作文攻略作文攻略 As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife… Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/ the moment they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife