雅思小作文柱状图解析.ppt

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1第二句以后：详细解释这一总体趋势。32第一句：比较图表中相对比的两个部分的所有比例得出一个总体结论。将图表中相似的趋势分别捏合成一段描述。柱状图主体段写法

languageforcomparisonsPercentageofgirlandboystudentsinClassA

morethan/fewerthanTherearemoreboys(67%)thangirls(33%)inClassA.ClassAhasfewergilrsthanboys.BoystakeupmorepercentagethangirlsinClassA.makeup;accountfor;occupy...

Thenumberofboysislarger/greater/higherthanthatofgirlsinClassA.Thepercentageofboys(67%)islarger/greater/higherthanthatofgirls(33%)inClassA.Thepercentageofboysislarger/greater/higherthanthatofgirlsinClassA(67%and33%respectively).123number/percentage

outnumber/exceed/

surpass/excelBoysoutnumbergirlsinClassA.01ThenumberofboysexceedsthatofgirlsinClassA.02Therearealmost/nealy/roughlytwiceasmanyboysasgirlsinClassA.03

”ThechartbelowshowsinformationaboutHeartAttacksbyAgeandGenderinUSA.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Youshouldwriteatleast150words.Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

ThegraphshowshowageandgenderinfluencethefrequencyofheartattacksintheUS.Lessthan6%ofallheartattacksoccurinthe29-44agegroup.Thenumberofwomenwhosufferheartattacksinthisgroupisnegligible-only3000peryear,comparedto123,000men.Howevertheproportionofmenandwomenwithheartattacksrisesdramaticallybetween45and64,withoverhalfamillionperyear.Over420,000menayearinthisagegrouphaveheartattacks.Theincidenceamongstwomenincreases-womenhaveoneheartattackforeverythreemeninthisagegroup.

Overtheageof65,thenumberofmensufferingheartattacksonlyincreasesslightly.Howeverthereisahugeincreaseinthenumberofwomenwithheartattacks-theycompriseover40%ofallvictims.Inconclusion,menaremorelikelytobethevictimsofheartattacksatallages,butwomenarei