作文评讲经历感受2.ppt

* 作文讲评 1. Today I and my classmates joined the activity which organized by my school. 2. obese- obesity overweigh- overweight outweigh Overweigh children To prevent us from being obesity To aviod overweigh and obese,… 3. Some reasons to overweight can be listed as follow. 4. After read the passage / (gather at the school gate),…. 5. Being overweight is harmful for children’s health 6. healthy- health Overweight is harmful for children’s healthy 7. It is obviously that…. 8. Teenages may lack of confidence 9. Duing to eating manufactured and processed food, … 10. According the passage,…. 11. a balance diet my classmates and I joined in was organized Advantages far outweigh disadvantages. as follows for reading gathering to obvious Teenagers lack Due balanced Overweight obese avoid overweight and obesity health According to 读写任务 2. 以约120个词谈谈你对“青少年肥胖”的想法，内容包括： 1）造成青少年肥胖的原因； 2）肥胖的危害； 3）青少年应如何避免过度肥胖。 * The reasons why teenagers become obese can be listed as follows. On the one hand, …food. On the other hand,…are unwilling to do sports. * There are quite a few reasons leading to/( contributing to) teenagers’ obesity. Firstly,…. Besides, … what’s more,… * Obesity is always troublesome and does much harm to teenagers’ health. * Obesity/ overweight may have/ cause bad effects on teenagers’ health. This passage mainly tells us that more and more children in developing countries are becoming overweight. An official in the WHO shows us a reason for this phenomenon and provides a solution. 　Many children prefer meat or fried food to vegetables and fruits. But the fat and calories contained in such food lead to the increase in people’s weight. Besides, city lifestyles are another reason for children’s obesity. They travel in cars or other vehicles more than on foot, and they spend less time in doing physical activities. 　Some people try their best to lose weight as they think obesity has a bad effect on their appearance and charm. Actually, obesity c