半开放与开放性作文点击.ppt

半开放与开放性作文点击 One possible version: Monday September 20,2004 Sunny Today I’m very pleased to have met the visiting American students. This morning we had a friendly talk with them. On behalf of all the students, I told them about our after-class activities: Our school holds the English Corner every week so that the students can practise their spoken English. In March, our school usually organizes a tree-planting activity in the countryside. On New Year’s Eve we have a New Year party. Recently many students have taken part in the English Speech Contest. All these activities are well received. After that , I showed them around our school. Although I was tired, I was very happy. * 作业检查：目前，有不少中学生利用寒暑假期间打工赚钱．去年暑假期间，你曾在一家饭店打工当服务员．打工之余，你有如下感受： １．过去常常向父母要钱，现在你用自己赚的钱，心里很激动 ２．你明白了金钱的价值，也学会了一些与他人相处的方法 ３．积累了一些工作经验和社会经验，为以后步入社会作了些准备 总之，你度过了一个愉快的假期． 要求：不要逐字逐句翻译，词数１２０左右 典型错误:1.词: the valuable of money ;many student ; a English corner ;the important of protecting…;at March 12th 2.句子： （1) I fell/was exciting (2)The job was very tired (3) I getted many experiences (4) I was worked in a restaurant (5) I think it will good for my future (6) It’s not easily for my parents to own money (7) I could buy something what I want with my own money (8) I hope use the experiences in our job when I leave school (9) I used to use money which from my parents One possible version: Nowadays it is usual for us students to find part-time jobs in the holidays. Last summer, I worked as a waiter in a restaurant, and I learned a lot. Firstly, it was the first time for me to earn money on my own, so I felt extremely excited. Now I can buy what I want without asking my parents for money as before. Secondly, during the period I learned not only the value of money but also the way to get along with others. Thirdly, I gained some working experience as well as social experience, which I found a good preparation for the world outside school.