大学英语四级写作范文.ppt

大学英语四级写作范文 分析及指导 四级作文类型 现象分析、问题解决型 观点对比型 道理论证型 应用文 图表文 On Excessive Packaging 1. 目前很多商品存在过度包装现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议 No one in China has failed to notice that goods are wrapped（包装）in flaring（华美的，花哨的）boxes or bags. Taking a look around，we can find examples with ease：a small computer is packed in a thick and heavy（又厚又重）carton，clothes are putted in a well-designed plastic bags（塑料袋）which printed various kinds of patterns and colors and so on. What are the causes of thisproblem? On the one hand, in order to earn more economic gains(经济收益), a considerable number of （很多）manufactures usually wrap their products with unnecessary but appealing(吸引人的)materials aiming at attracting customer’s attention , arousing their curiosity and then stimulating their purchasing desire （吸引顾客的注意力，引发他们的好奇心并刺激他们的购买欲望）. On the other hand, quite a few customers believe that the more delicate the package seems，the superior the quality will be（包装越精美，产品质量就越好）,the notion has also encouraged the trend of excessive packaging. To change this situation, I think we should take the following measures. First, laws must be made and implemented to impose restriction on （实行限制）excessive packaging. Moreover, a public education campaign should be launched to arouse customers consciousness that packaging doesnt equal to quality. Only in this way can we put an end to this trend. 问题解决型作文模板 开头段：1) Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that . (2)For example, 中间段：(3)These have caused much harm/ many problems. (4)First of all . (5) In addition/ Furthermore, (6) Finally/Lastly/ Last but not least / What is more 结尾段：(7)In a word. (8) Therefore, it is high time that we take steps to stop . (9)We should start from trifles around ourselves . (10)As far as I am concerned. (11) For one thing .For another,. (12) Therefore, I am sure. 2.Online Shopping 1.指出现象:现在网上