写作技巧全面讲解.ppt

利用评分标准，写好四六级作文 2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8 分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11 分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14 分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 （注：字数不足应酌情扣分。） 存在的主要问题 不切题，或部分不切题； 连贯性较差； 句子层次错误多；严重语言错误； 表达思想不清楚； 表达不准确或不地道；缺乏精彩的句子、缺乏变换（句式变换、词语变换）；内容空洞。 “一致性” unity 是指写的句子、段落或文章所表达的思想是一个完整的一个统一体。句子里的词语，段落里的句子，甚至文章里的段落应紧密地围绕主题。 (1) 将写作中与中心无关的内容删去 Eg: The parking space of our university, which is one of the most beautiful in our city, has become completely inadequate, and recently the board of directors voted to increase the school budget for the construction of a new parking lot. Eg: On the other hand, the young usually don’t like being controlled by the old routine. They look for personality and freedom. Of course, there is family problem, such as the parent like boys and hate girls, etc. 一致性” unity 1.There are many reasons to cause the Generation Gap, especially the age and the viewport. The west and the east are different. Because they haven’t the same besic of scieuty and think in different ways. 2. On one hand, the parent always treat us as a child. They are on the top of the family. On the other hand, the young people think they are no longer a boy. 一致性” unity (2) 对结构过于松散，未能明确表达中心思想的句子应加以改写。 I worry about whether I will get a job, and I am convinced that new chances will appear maybe at the end of this month. 一致性” unity E.g. I got up early. Mom told me that there was always traffic jam and our car was a little bit too old and we need to buy a new one. 一致性” unity 例：Some people think it is because the child didn’t want to talk with his parents. But I do not think so. Some times, we chat with our parents, and tell them our thought if they didn’t agree with us, they would agrue with us and let us admit mind of them. So the Generation Gap is produced. 改： Some people think it is because the child didn’t want to talk with his parents. But I do not think so. Some times