《荷塘月色》英译文对比赏析[精心整理].ppt

荷塘月色译本对比分析 朱纯深：Moonlight over the Lotus Pond 杨宪益夫妇：The Lotus Pool By Moonlight 题目：荷塘月色 今晚却很好，虽然月光也还是淡淡的。 朱译：The foliage, which, in a moon- less night, would loom somewhat frighteningly dark, looks very nice tonight, although the moonlight is not more than a thin, greyish veil. 杨译：On nights when there is no moon the track is almost terrifyingly dark, but tonight it was quite clear, though the moonlight was pale. 朱译：Underneath, the exquisite water is covered from view，and none can tell its color; yet the leaves on top project themselves all the more attractively. 杨译：That was the softly running water beneath, hidden from sight, its color invisible, though the leaves looked more graceful than ever. Exquisite: delicate and sensitive Soft: pleasant gentle and comfortable. 叶子底下是脉脉的流水，遮住了，不能见一些颜色；而叶子却更见风致了。 月光如流水一般，静静地泻在这一片叶子和花上。 朱译：The moon sheds her liquid light silently over the leaves and flowers. 杨译：Moonlight cascaded like water over the lotus leaves and flowers. Liquid: 1)existing as or having characteristics of a liquid; especially tending to flow 2)clear and bright Cascade: rush down in big quantities, like a cascade 叶子和花仿佛在牛乳中洗过一样；又像笼着轻纱的梦。 朱译：…look as if they had just been bathed in milk, or like a dream wrapped in a gauzy hood. 杨译：A light blue mist floating up from the pool made them seem washed in milk or caught in a gauzy dream. 这时候最热闹的，要数树上的蝉声与水里的蛙声；但热闹是它们的，我什么也没有。 朱译：But the liveliness is theirs, I have nothing. 杨译：But this animation was theirs alone, I had no part in it. 参考文献 [1]石琼洁,郭兰英.《荷塘月色》两个英译本对比赏析—基于读者反应论[J].吉林省教育学院学报,2010,(03):112-114. [2]朱纯深. 翻译探微: 语言. 文本. 诗学[M ]. 南京: 译林出版社, 2008 [3]戴成社. 5荷塘月色6赏析[ J]. 教材研究, 2004, ( 1): 56- 57. Thank you~