对立观点型学生作文点评.ppt

Study Abroad or in China * (一)点明主题的 1. When it comes to ``````, opinions vary from person to person. 2.there is a nationwide controversy争论 today about the problem of ``````` 4. Different people have different opinions on``````` 不同的人对``````有不同的看法. 6. The issue of whether….. or not has been widely argued. (二)介绍两种对立式观点的 1. Some people hold the opinion that … However, other people hold a different point of view`````` 2. Some people are inclined to think that…. On the contrary, there are still many people who won’t agree, and they claim 4. Those who criticize/oppose to/object to…argue that… But people who advocate/favor…,on the other hand, maintain/assert that… (三)个人观点 1. As far as I am concerned, I would like to agree to the former. 2. As to me , I agree to the latter opinion to certain extent. 4. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we…… we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems and then make the right decision. 主要问题： 1. 盲目崇洋，认为国外学生自由，赚钱。 2. 对套句的理解有误 Eg: ①When it come to study abroad or in China When it comes to the issue of studying abroad or in China ②The issue of whether study abroad or not has been widely debated. The issue of whether we should study abroad or not has been widely debated. ③There is a nationwide discussion controversy today … 3. 用词错误 With the development of the economic we must keep pace with the social In abroad at abroad Aboard board broad abroad Majority of people On the countrary, With the development of the economy we must keep pace with the society Aboard adv. prep 在船上， We are aboard the ship. abroad adv.在海外 live abroad , go abroad Board n.v.甲板，上船 We went on board the ship. We boarded the ship. broad adj. adv. 宽阔的，广泛的 The majority of people On the contrary, 4. 语法句法错误 When they in abroad, … I agree the former. Study abroad is good to ourselves. Known to us all in many ways China