英语四级写作Writing(CET4)ppt课件.ppt

Writing (CET-4) Guo Jia 历年真题范文欣赏 习作基础技能 模拟话题范文 经典句型摘抄 ★ Introduction Creating a Green Campus In the last few years, environmental pollution has become the focus of public attention. Many universities have taken effective measures to build green campuses. Obviously, it has Been realized that creating a green campus is extremely important. Actually, creating a green campus contains not only building a Beautiful campus environment, but also fostering a strong sense of environmental protection. Young people are the backbone of nation-building. Thus, only if they develop the sense of environmental protection can they build a green country in the future and contribute their knowledge and energy to the society. ★ Models to share Therefore, as university students, we should play an active role in the actions of building a green homeland. First, we should always bear saving resources in mind. For example, turn off the water tap after using it. Second, we should assume our responsibilities to spread the spirit so as to call upon more people to join in this promising project. 注意闪光词汇 ★ Basic writing skills Writing failures 1 Checking standard 2 words phrases 3 Writing models 4 学生作文中经常出现的错误： 标题 单词拼写、大小写、标点符号随心所欲 词语搭配张冠李戴 句子时态混乱，主谓不一致 非谓语动词 从句滥用 分数等级 评分标准 2分 条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。 5分 基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重的语言错误。 8分 基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中一些是严重错误。 11分 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分 切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 英语写作高分秘诀:主题切题＋段落连贯＋语言生动 1．句式要有变化 ① 复合句、并列句 ② 倒装句 （1）虚拟语气中if省略 （2）only+状语置于句首 （3）否定词置于句首 （4）地点副词置于句首 ③ 强调句型 It is ……that (who)… ④ 非谓语动词。 ⑤ 虚拟语气 ⑥ 固定句型结构 too…to… so…that… such a…that… not only…but also… neither…nor… such as… not …until… so that…