Project 1 Being a good student(Part B-C)课件(共19张PPT)(含音频+视频).pptx
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Aboutme!Hello,hello,everyone!I’myournewEnglishteacher.YoucancallmeStella.Ilikesinginganddrawing.Iworkhardeveryday.Iwanttobeagoodteacher.Doyouwanttobeagoodstudent?
BeingagoodstudentWriting
Let’swatchthecartooncarefully.WatchandsayTrytomakearightjudgment.
Whatdoyouthinkofthem?
What‘swrongwithGeorge?
Whathappened?
AgoodstudentThinkanddiscussIshould/shouldn’t…小组内讨论并思考,怎样能成为一名好学生。Ican/can’t…Iwill/won’t…I…
你能对照Stella给的评价表给这篇作文一些建议吗?怎么修改一下。1.Thecontentiscorrecttothepoint.2.Thelanguageisfluentandcorrect.3.Thehandwritingisneatandnormative.4.Thearticleexpressedclearlyandlogically.内容切题无误语言正确流畅书写工整美观表达条理清晰GivesomeadviceTip:WecanusedifferentsymbolstoModify.我们可以使用不同的修改符号。表示“某处有错”^×表示“应该添加某词”/表示“删除某词”
BeingagoodstudentIwanttobeagoodstudent.Atschool,Ishouldstudyhard.IshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyIshouldhelpmyparentsdosomehousework,washtheclothes.Ishouldn’tIthinkIcanbeagoodstudent.Compareandfindsuchassweepthefloor,cleantheroomandthrowrubbishontheroad.or对照老师给的范文,找一找使文章条理清晰的地方。Athome,wasteanyfoodeither.Ishouldn’tmakealotofnoiseInpublicplaces,Icantrytobebetter.finishmyworkontime.and
WritingAtschoolAthomeInpublicplacesBeingagoodstudentand/or/suchas/also…1.WritetopicsentencesHowcanweexpressclearlyandlogically?2.Organizerelateddetails3.Writebeginningandendingsentences.
Canwethinkand思考:关于这篇作文我们还(从其他方面划分文章)Thinkanddiscusstrytowriteanothertopicsentences?可以写哪些主题句。
GoodhabitsAhealthydietFollowingtherules。。。你们能选择一种方法写一篇作文吗?
BeingagoodstudentUsefulphrases:politelanguage(文明用语)protecttheenvironment(保护环境)dosomehousework(做家务)loveflowersandplants(爱护花草)
标准:等级A:10~12等级B:6~9等级C:6以下CheckandreviseCheckinglist1.内容切题无误2.语言正确流畅3.书写工整规范4.表达条理清晰同桌之间互相修改,并通过打星给出总评!
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