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雅思写作真题WYST2249 Academic TASK 2 主题提示： Argumentation 科技话题 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: Many jobs in the home nowadays can be done by machines. Has it brought more advantage than disadvantage? Write at least 250 words. 需论证命题核心词： Machine; reduces manpower; save time Organization 构思 Making a plan Introduction Main Body 1 Main Body 2 Main Body 3* Conclusion *For option 1.论证角度提示：从积极的一面讲，机器更快，更方便节能。 分论点Topic Sentence: On the positive side, machines are faster, more convenient and energy saving (©) 举例说明:Households and industries are much facilitated with machines. Personal use of machines gives people more free time to spend with family and pursue hobbies . Likewise, industrial use of machines reduces manpower for work and increases output. In the words of Oscar Wilde – “The fact is, that civilization requires slaves. The Greeks were quite right there. Unless there are slaves to do the ugly, horrible, uninteresting work, culture and contemplation become almost impossible. Human slavery is wrong, insecure, and demoralizing. On mechanical slavery, on the slavery of the machine, the future of the world depends. 翻译：家庭和各行各业都得益于机器的帮助。个人使用机器，可以让人们有更多的空闲时间陪 伴家人和追求兴趣爱好。同样，工业用机器节省了劳动力，并增加了输出。用奥斯卡·王尔德的 话 -- “事实是，文明需要的奴隶。希腊人在文明要求奴隶制存在的观点上是非常正确的。除非 有奴隶做的丑陋的，可怕，乏味的工作，文化和默祷变得几乎不可能。人类奴隶制是错误的，危 险的，堕落的。机械奴役，未来世界依赖的是机器奴役制。 2.论证角度提示：在消极的一面，机器减少手工作业的需要，这可能会导致失业， 尤其是在发展中国家。 分论点Topic Sentence: On the negative side, machines reduce the need of manual work which can lead to unemployment especially in the developing countries . 举例说明:What is more, insufficient knowledge of machine handling and operating is detrimental to uneducated workers and they