7种错误致托福写作分数流失.doc

7种错误致托福写作分数流失 1. 中式英语 　　原：Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation. 　　改：Thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation. 　　评：中文习惯说“人们可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力”，而英语则习惯说“It’s easier for sb. to…”同学们要注意中英表述习惯的区别哦! 　　2. 时态混乱 　　原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job. 　　改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job. 　　评：过去时的句子中冒出了现在时，同学你太粗心了，要仔细检查哦~ 　　原：I would explain my view in the following paragraphs. 　　改：I’d like to explain… / I will explain… 　　评：可能是两种说法记混了吧，结果把时态搞错了…… 　　3. 用词不当 　　原：The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society. 　　改：The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society. 　　评：groupwork是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。 　　原：You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture. 　　改：You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture. 　　评：dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的，有危险性的”，而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢? 　　原：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development. 　　改：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development. 　　评：模样长得像，意思可不同了。这里想用动词affect表示“影响”，却误写为名词effect“效果”，一字千里啊! 　　4. 搭配错误 　　原：Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent. 　　改：Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence. 　　评：这位同学显然记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法，在 HYPERLINK /beikaocelue/ \t _blank 托福考试中，写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。 　　原：Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career. 　　改：Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career. 　　评：此处是一个明显的动宾搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是improve the skills，而不是increase the skills. 　　5.词性错位 　　原：I wi