GRE写作argument官方范文优劣分析续-智课教育旗下智课教育.pdf

智 课 网 G R E 备 考 资 料 GRE写作argument官方范文优劣分析续-智课教育旗下 智课教育 为了帮助同学们高效备考，智课教育小编为同学们准备了新GRE写 作argument官方范文优劣分析，希望同学们通过范文不同分段的优劣 分析，找到GRE写作的得分点。 下文就是新GRE写作argument官方范文优劣分析的相关内容，同 学们可以参考以下GRE写作范文的写作思路和写作方法，加以学习，衡 量自己的写作和范文之间的差距，找到高分突破点，取得好成绩。 下面来看以Memorandum from the business manager of a television station为主题的范文，小编为大家依次展示6-1分不等的例 文，大家可以好好研讨一下，肯定会有很大收获。 Essay Response – Score 6 The decision to restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level is one that should be made with more careful consideration of evidence, data, and viewer/client feedback by the business manager of this television station. Many assumptions have been made on the business manager’s part about the exact cause of the problems with the program. He or she should approach the idea of making changes with more caution. The memorandum stated that more complaints received from viewers were concerned with the station’s coverage of weather and local news, but it did not state the nature of the complaints. The viewers may have been complaining about the accuracy or quality of the weather and local news rather than the shortened length of the segments. More specific information about the complaints– including whether they were about the late-night edition or about other news programs during the day–would support the argument because it would show if there was a relationship between the shortened length of the segments in the late-night news program and the viewers’ dissatisfaction with these particular segments. Sometimes it is the personalities and the chemistry of the news anchors that govern people’s decisions about which station’s news they watch. The business manager will never know unless he asks the viewers exactly why they do or do not enjoy watching his news program. Additionally, stated in the memorandum was the fact that local businesses had just canceled their advertising contracts with the station. An assumption being made is that the reason businesses were pulling their ads was dir