基础雅思写作课件.ppt

10. 在当代，外语技能对个人和职业的发展都至关重要。 Nowadays，foreign language skills are essential to personal and professional development. 11. 严格的惩罚是减少犯罪率的有效首段。 Strict punishment is an effective method to reduce crime. 5. 文章第一段(1,2,3句的写作) 第一句：引入写作背景 “现在”简单句 Today/Nowadays/Recently/Currently/In recent years... Exercise： (1)现在，全球化趋势日渐明显。 (2)现在，老年人口越来越多。 (3)最近，远程教育变得越来越流行。 (4)最近几年，文化艺术在我们的生活中起到越来越重要的作用。 (5)现在，手机和互联网的普及使得我们的生活更加方便。 Sample answer 首段 第一句 背景 Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that education is playing a more and more important role in a nation’s development. 其他表达方式 Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the problem/the purpose + 同位语从句... Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about + 宾语从句. 如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容，就直接表达观点，两句话写完首段。 I agree with the view that… .Reasons are as follows. 我赞同的观点是……原因如下。 第二句 交代辩论话题 However, whether more national investment should be put in science rather than other subjects to develop the country is a controversial issue/has caused a heated debate. 其他表达方式 主语从句 Whether more national investment should be put in science rather than other subjects to develop the country is a controversial issue. 同位语从句 Some people hold the view that more national investment should be put in science rather than other subjects to develop the country. 宾语从句 Some people agree that..., while others believe that ... . 第三句 交代自己的写作观点 My view is that the government should invest more money in science rather than other subjects. 其他表达方式： In my view/opinion, ... I agree with the view that... , for the following reasons. 如果在第二句交代辩论话题时，用的是“一些人认为...， 而另一些人认为... ”，第三句表达观点的时候可以简单地写成如下形式： I agree with the former/latter view for the following reasons. 第二段 第一句 本段中心句 Firstly, it is obvious that science education promotes the advancement of science and technology. 其他同义替换句式 Firstly, it is clear/apparent/evident/true/undoubted that... . Firstly, there is no doubt that... . One reason for this is that... . 第二句 对中