shouldwehelpstrangers修改稿.doc

标题：Should We Help Strangers? 字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字 满分: 100要求： 1. 有人认为帮助陌生人是一种美德; 2. 有人却认为帮助陌生人会给自己带来麻烦和危险; 3. 我认为……As we all know, helping others is considered as a kind of noble virtue in China for many years. As a matter of fact, helping others can enhance our sense of morals and responsibilities especially. Nevertheless, when it comes to helping strangers, peoples views vary from person to person. Some people put the opinion that helping strangers, is just like helping the men who you are acquainted with, also is a kind of virtue in Chinese culture. They explain that a huge number of strangers in trouble are kind. They will be grateful to you and you may get something in return if you offer helps to them. Therefore, it is high time that we should try to help strangers. However, some people hold the view that helping strangers is meaningless for the reason that it may bring you trouble or danger as consequence. From my point of view, helping strangers is a kind thing. So it is high time that we should spare no effort to do whenever it is convenient for us. Furthermore, we can learn a lot from the process of helping others. Besides, what should be underlined is that whenever helping strangers we should keep a clear mind. Only in this way, can our society change for the better. 字数:214 得分86 评语： 拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用 按 句 点 评 显示全部 1.1 As we all know, helping others is considered as a kind of noble virtue in China for many years. [教师点评] [学习提示] 易混词汇: kind, sort, type, class, classification, category, species, variety 均有“种，类，类型”之意。 kind: 指性质相同，而且特征很相似，足以归为一类的人或东西。sort: 普通用词，文体较kind随便，指对人或对事物进行的大概分类，有时含贬义。type: 指客观界限比较清楚，有相同本质特点的同类事物，或指大致相似的同类事物。class: 正式用词，指门类、种类或优劣等级；用于指动植物的分类时，表示“纲”。classification: 指根据已经确定的类型对某一实物作鉴别和归类。category: 书面用词，特指有确切定义的群体。species: 书面用词，单复数同形。指生物分类上的种。variety: 强调有各自的特点，形式不同，品质不同的种类。 好评报错 [批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow 好评报错 [批改提示] consider近义表达有think about/ refle