Xdtyfr托福写作辅导材料.doc

生命是永恒不断的创造，因为在它内部蕴含着过剩的精力，它不断流溢，越出时间和空间的界限，它不停地追求，以形形色色的自我表现的形式表现出来。－－泰戈尔levels, though it may have occasional errors.能展示出较高的写作能力，在修辞和句法等方面达到定的水平，文章允许出现个别错误。 Effectively addresses the writing task 文章切题，观点明确； Well organized and well developed 段落组织有序，合理展开说明； Uses clear appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas使用正确的事例支持论点或说明观点； Displays consistent facility in the use of language 能够流畅地，连贯地使用语言 Demonstrate syntactic variety and appropriate word choice. 句式多样，用词准确。 5分：Demonstrate competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels, though it will probably have occasional errors 在修辞、句法方面有一定的表达能力，但文章偶然会有错误。 may addresses some parts of the writing task more effectively than others 能有效地按照要求协作，但某些部分有欠缺； generally well organized and well developed 段落组织基本有序，合理展开说明； Uses clear details to support a thesis or illustrate an ideas能使用事例支持论点或说明观点； Displays facility in the use of language 展现出语言的使用能力； Demonstrate some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary. 有些句式和词汇的变化。 4分：demonstrate minimal competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactical levels 展示出一些写作能力修辞与句法能力一般。 Addresses the writing topic adequately but may slightly parts of the task Is adequately organized and developed Uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea Demonstrate adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage May contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning 3 分：demonstrate some developing competence in writing, but it remains flawed on either the rhetorical or syntactical level, or both. Inadequate organization or development Inappropriate or insufficient details to support or illustrate generalizations A noticeable inappropriate choice of words or word forms An accumulation of errors in sentence structure and/or usage. 2分: suggests incompetence in writing Serious disorganization or underdevelopment Little or no detail, or irrelevant specifics Serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage Serious problems with focus