写作提优练-Unit 2 Home sweet home课件-新教材人教版英语八年级上册.pptx

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本单元以“温馨之家”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①家庭生活中的温暖氛围;②家庭生活中家务活的积极参与;③家庭生活中的爱与感恩。;[写作任务]

俗话说“家和万事兴”。和睦的家庭能给每一位家庭成员带来温暖、快乐、健康、智慧和前进的力量。英语课上,老师开展了一次以“Whatcanwedotomakehomeahappierplace?”为主题的讨论,同学们交流了自己的想法。请结合图片,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊EnglishLearning投稿。;要求：1.短文须包括所给要点信息,可适当发挥;

2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名以及地名;

3.词数80左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。;InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecoulddotomakehomeahappierplace.

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InourEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionaboutwhatwecoulddotomakehomeahappierplace.We’veshareddifferentideas.;Somesayit’sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.④Theybelievefamilymembersshouldsharehappinessandworries①.Whentheymeetproblems,familymemberscandosomethingtocheerthemup②.⑤Homeisalwaysthefirstplaceforthemtogethelpandsupport.Othersthinkit’snecessarytorememberfamily’sbirthdaysandpreparesmallpresents.;Inmyopinion③,showingloveforfamilyisreallyimportant.Sometimes,eventhesmallestthinglikewalkingwithfamilymakesthemhappier.;亮点词块

①sharehappinessandworries分享快乐和忧虑

②cheerthemup让他们振作起来

③inmyopinion在我看来;高分句子

④Somesayit’sagoodideatospendmoretimewithfamily.(省略that的宾语从句)

⑤Whentheymeetproblems,familymemberscandosomethingtocheerthemup.(when引导的时间状语从句);跟踪演练

英文有句谚语“Noplacelikehome.”,家是幸福温暖的港湾。假如你是Sandy,请你以“Home,SweetHome”为题写一篇短文介绍你的家。

要求：1.词数80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.内容可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。;Home,SweetHome

IamSandy._____________________________________

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IamSandy.Ilivewithmyfamily,andwesharemanyhappymoments.Homeismyfavoriteplace.Itis