GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 4月06日更新(三).pdf

智 课 网 G M A T 备 考 资 料 GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 4月06日更新（三） 狗主回忆： 6. 作文A Company surveyed employees for the most needed imporvernment→communication is the top 1 →communication secssion conducted by high-level management→大家都觉得啊~西吧~公司变好了 from： 六毛欢乐多 原题猜测： The following appeared in a memorandum from the director of human resources to the executive officers of Company X: “Last year, we surveyed our employees on improvements needed at Company X by having them rank, in order of importance, the issues presented in a list of possible improvements. Improved communications between employees and management was consistently ranked as the issue of highest importance by the employees who responded to the survey. As you know, we have since instituted regular communications sessions conducted by high-level management, which the employees can attend on a voluntary basis. Therefore, it is likely that most employees at Company X now feel that the improvement most needed at the company has been made.” Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc. 思路参考： 提供观点： 1. The result of a last years survey does not necessarily represent the improvement most needed of this year. 2. How was the survey held has not been illustrated by the author, thus making the conclusion groundless. 3. Whether the implement of the mentioned resolution is right or wrong is still unkonwn, it is still too early to say the improvement has been made. 1， 调查的可信性：是否anonymous，如果要named，很可能并 不是他们最想要的改进。 2， 改进方法是否充分?是否交流会有很好交流，并且采纳accept意见 北美范文： The Director of Human Resources concludes that most employees at Company X feel that the improvement most needed at the company has been satisfactorily addressed. Two reasons are offered in support of this conclusion. First, a survey of employees showed that the issue respondents were most concerned about was employee-management communication.