托福写作高分句型写作窍门.docx

智课网TOEFL备考资料托福写作高分句型写作窍门（1） 新 托福 写作并不难，关键原因是同学们在把握了方法后能从容应对，更能在托福 写作中取得高分或满分的成绩。 新托福 写作高分的标准之一就是熟练使用各种句型，本文中， 小马 过河托福频道为您 托福写作 亮眼高分句是怎样炼成的，希望对您的新托福写作考试有所帮助。 I 准确的句子表达 1. 句型分析 英语的句型包括以下几种，简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中，一般使用复合句，辅以并列句和并列复合句，当然肯定要有简单句，做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。 a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English. 这句话是一个复合句，由even though引导的让步状语从句。 b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly. 这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中，有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。 c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job. 上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子，是一个并列句;because引导的原因状语从句。 d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark. 这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子，成为并列句，再一个which引导的定语从句。 2. 有问题的句子的列举 考生写的句子容易出现三个问题：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接连句，三是句子连接不正确。 1). 破碎句 所谓破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词)，或者是从句单独成句。 破碎句：She singing alone. (无谓语，singing是现在分词) 正确句：She is singing alone. 破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句) 正确句：He did not come because he was sick. 2).接连句 所谓接连据，就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词，也未使用正确的标点符号。 接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time. 正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time. 正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time. 3).句子连接不正确 所谓句子连接不正确，就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接，这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、 分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。 不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.