c7高中英语作文写作–如何写建议信.ppt

书面表达专题;　如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。;写作要点： 1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 ;3. 基本框架： 开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea) 主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence) 结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.) ;4. 注意事项： 1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由 2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。 3）符合英文信件的基本格式； 4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。;常用套语;B. 表达建议（body） 1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 3. …is a good/great idea. 4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 5. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should… ;C.建议信结尾常用句式 ;假如你叫孙军，是实验高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：;第一步：审题 养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：;三个步骤;第二步：搜索相关词组或句型;学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街;润色小建议; The traffic is busy during the rush hours.;润色小建议; 加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤;加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ What’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age.; 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险;Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.;suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do… such as;第三步. 连句成文;;;;;;优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。;;优秀作文范例3;;;;;;Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. When it comes to traffic jams， it’s crammed with cars during the rush hour. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. As a consequence ,