高考英语二模林书豪的成功.ppt

Discussion about Jeremy Lin’s success;内容要点（写作时注意得分点）;;典型普遍错误： As is vividly shown in the survey, there are four reasons accounting for Jeremy Lin’s success. The first is his hard working. The second is he has gift in playing basketball and the third is his education. The last one is he is good luck. According to the questionnaire that Jeremy Lin’s achievement weather will beyond Yao Ming’s, 20% of people say that it is impossible; 10% of netizens say that it is uncertain. However, 70 percent of them say that Lin must beyond Yao Ming. In my opinion, we must learn from Lin. Firstly, working hard is the key to success. Besides, we should receive as much education as we can. Third, be brave. Only in this we can we win. ; 1. 70%of them believe that he will be superior to/ be more outstanding/popular than YM. 2. Good luck is also responsible for /accounts for / is the key to /contributes to Lin’s success. 3. …play an important role in ...../make a difference to his success 4. ...matter/count 5. ...owe his success to .... 6. ..., while others hold the opinion that it is his gift for basketball that really matters/ counts.（强调句） 7. There is no denying/ doubt that..... 8. ..., which is the key to his success.;9. ...think that talent furnishes the work only with materials of success, it is working hard that makes what we do successful.（强调句） 10. Good education from his parents also counts/ is of great importance. 11. 70% people think there is no doubt that he will make greater achievements than Yao Ming in the future. 12. When chances are knocking at our door, we should catch them without hesitation . 13. What the questionnaire conveys to us is that there are four reasons accounting for his success. ;14;本次考试0分作文： I hate Lin. 点评： 考生用简简单单的三个字I hate Lin来宣泄对林书豪的讨厌以及对本场英语考试的不满，文不对题，态度极端恶劣，给予0分，“实至名归”，望广大考生引以为戒！！！;3分作文： What a fucking man he is in my opinion. I don’t understand why so many people like him as he just a person who play basketball very