写作句式高级化策略 how to improve basic writing.ppt

Basic writing ; 2014届高三湛江市调研卷英语试题 单调难成，群柱可擎天。学会合作，是为人处世的一个重要的方面。请你根据下表中的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Partner”的英文演讲稿。 ;;;;How to improve the sentences?;Ⅰ 尽量使用高级词汇，短语优先 1．The club has twenty members. 2．The dog sensed danger and ran away. 3．He said he would help me if necessary. 4．When I saw the horse，I began to cheer up. ; 上海，中国最大城市，被誉为“东方之珠”.;由于那噪音的持续,我无法继续学习。 With the noise going on, I couldn’t go on studying. ;a)爱迪生出生在美国，是一个伟大的科学家及发明家。 Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. b)在这幅图中, 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。 In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, watching her babies flying away. c)为了学习好, 我们需要做体育运动。 To study well, we need to do sports.;;; 如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。;;高级词汇;Group work;1. Amy Chua, 美籍华人, 耶鲁大学教授。(同位语) (广东) Amy Chua, in Yale University. 2. 小车已成为受人欢迎的交通方式, 给人们的生活带来了方便。(现在分词短语) (江西) Cars have become a popular means of transport, . 3. 我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语) (福建) We students should try to get good results . 4.植物园位于我们学校的西南角，面积1000平方米。（非谓语） , the botanical garden has an area of 1000 square metres. ;;1.直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。(强调句) her father recognized her. 2.只有师生齐心协力，我们学校才会更加美好。 (倒装) ________________________ _____________ our school become a more enjoyable place. 3.黑板上的子是那么小，他几乎看??见。 (倒装) _________________________________ _ that he could hardly see them. 4.直到河里所有的鱼都死了，这里的农民才意识到污染时多么严重。 (倒装) how serious the pollution was.;;Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols