托福写作：如何改善中国式英语句子-智课教育旗下智课教育.pdf

智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料 托福写作：如何改善中国式英语句子-智课教育旗下智 课教育 在托福写作中，如果大量出现一些中国式英语句子是不利于大家在 托福写作中取得高分的，那么怎样才能按照托福写作评分标准改正这一 现象呢？下面就跟着小编一起来看看吧！ 托福写作 中句子的使用是非常有技巧的。因为结构句可以使托福写 作的水平立刻提高一个层次，也会在同时凸显出考生在英语语言的方面 的应用能力。并且托福写作评分标准中句型结构也非常重要，那么怎样 才能保证托福写作拿高分呢？下面就跟着智课教育小编一起来看看该怎 样让自己的作文脱离中式英语吧！ 中国人写英语往往会带有中国式英语的感觉，看下面是如何改进的 。 句子： 1. The artists work pushes our civilization to a higher level. 改进：Artists work upgrades our civilization. 2. For example, you work in a big factory. 改进: Suppose you work in a big factory. 3. Youll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 改进：Youll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. 改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. 5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. 改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. 6. Their brain is still very young. 改进: They are still immature. 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things. 改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. 8. They cant analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong. 改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. 以上就是小编为大家整理的托福写作：如何把改进中国式英语，非 常实用，如果想了解更多考试资讯 ，下载更多备考资料 ，欢迎登陆智课 教育论坛 ，最后预祝每一位考生都能考出好成绩。