高三一轮复习writing公开课课件（21张ppt）.ppt

Checklist to BBC editors a formal letter basic structure: introduction+ pros and cons+ conclusion (personal opinion) more convincing: explanation/examples/quotations/statistics independent thinking Objectives By the end of the class, you will be able to: improve the concluding paragraph. use linking words correctly. Role Description Participation Boss: to make sure that everyone participates and that you have a reporter in your group. Laptop Boss: to operate the laptop in group editing and make sure that everyone closes the laptop lid on request. Language Boss: to look words up or ask the teacher for help. Please appreciate the three concluding paragraphs. Which one do you like best? Why? 2 min Group Sharing: “I like …’s ending.” “In the concluding paragraph, he/she stands on the optimistic/pessimistic side by restating/ further explaining…” “The use of … is proper and correct.” 2 min concluding paragraph transition supportive detail (restatement) personal opinion (34 times) (27 times) (9 times) Correct use of linking words Find the corpus (语料库) corpus Exports of gas and oil continues to fall, while imports of raw materials have risen. The walls are green, while the ceiling is white. The poor starve while the rich feast. Class5 Group Editing: Please improve the writing mainly by correcting transitional expressions. (No. 614019) * Each group works on only one laptop. Self-editing (5min) Please improve your concluding paragraph. Make sure your concluding paragraph is well-organized with transition, personal opinion and supportive detail. * Get prepared to read your concluding paragraph! Homework Thank you! A corpus is a large collection of written or spoken texts that is used for language research. * A corpus is a large collection of written or spoken texts that is used for language research. *