作文08 广东卷-2018年中考英语满分作文特快专刊 .doc
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作文08 广东卷
你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
注意:(1)回信应包括所有要点;
词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数)
不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少,感觉孤单
参加学校社团(club)-结识更多朋友
2.?(请你补充)
英语单词难记
1.多阅读英语故事、新闻--在运用中学单词
2.?(请你补充)
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that _
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Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
与往年不同的是,今年是根据两个不同的问题再分别补充建议,强调在核心素养背景下学生解决问题的能力;同时需要学生发散思维,在语言表达的空间上创设性较大,凸显难度。最后学生在陈述理由时,还需注意审题,把握建议与理由之间的逻辑关系。另外,学生在写作时需要注意人称与时态。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you felt lonely because you had few friends. To solve this problem, I advise you to take part in school clubs to make more friends. What’s more, you can join some study groups where you can not only acquire knowledge, but also make more friends.!网
You also said that you had difficulty in remembering English words. I think it is a good way to learn words by reading more English stories and news. In additions, you should try your best to speak English in daily life. Day by day, you will remember a lot of words and make some progress.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
2018年广州中考英语作文的体裁是书信类应用文,本文要求写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由,根据表格中的信息可知,应根据两个不同的问题再分别补充建议。在写作时,要注意审题,适当发挥,逻辑思路清晰,语句通顺。根据书信内容可知,本文人称为第一人称,提到Ben时,用第二人称。表达建议,时态为一般现在时。
本文第一段直接说明Ben的第一个问题,朋友少,
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