初中英语写作课.pptx

Paragraph WritingMu ZhonghuaNo.39 Middle SchoolLearning Target (学习目标) We are learning how to write a paragraph to show ideas.?paragraph段落 Yao Ming, the center of the Chinese National Men’s Basketball Team, served the Huston Rockets in the 2002 NBA. The 2.26 m, 120 kg center becomes the first one to come from a foreign team. Yao Ming was born in Shanghai in September, 1980. His mother was a center and captain of the Chinese National Women’s Team. His father played basketball, too. Sport analyst Bill Walton said, “Yao Ming has the potential the capability of changing the future of basketball.” Success Criteria (目标达成要求) □1.I can write a strong topic sentence. 2.I can write three detail sentences.□□ 3.I can write a closing sentence.4.I can use words or phrases to make the ideas more clear.□5.I can check my grammar, spelling and punctuation(, . ! …) after writing.□G/N G-Good N-needs improvementParagraph Writingdetail sentence1beginningdetail sentence2detail sentence3bodyclosing sentencetopic sentenceendingGroupwork A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos.____ zoos are place for people to see many different kind of animals from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants……. ____zoos look after the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. ____zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places to live in. ______________. Task1: Underline the topic sentence. Task2:*Add transitional words or phrases for detail sentences.(添加过渡语) *Write a closing sentence. Word Wall—Transitional Words(过渡语）first, firstly, first of all, to begin (start )with, detail1表示层次second，secondly, then, next, after that, besides, what’s moredetail2third, thirdly, finally, lastly, at last，in the enddetail3in a word, in short , as a result表示总结 closingGroupwork Task 3:Reread the paragraph for mistakes and correct them. A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos.____ zoos are