GMAT高分作文范例.docx

GMAT高分作文范例 GMAT高分作文范例 PAGE PAGE10 GMAT高分作文范例 PAGE 1. 我用的是800分大牛tonyadidas 的AA模 版，但依照，各段稍作精（把拗口的一些、句式去掉），再排了序（挑出常考到的高 理 由 ） 。 2. 画典的段首、 尾句式，必背 熟、灵便运用！因各段内容可以，也常常 的是屡次，但有了漂亮的段首、尾来保障构，就安全多了。 特别典的开、尾――看完目就开始直接打两段，打想原由！ （典）开段模板 Theconclusion endorsedin thisargumentis that?.Severalreasonsare offered insupport of thisargument. First of all, the author points outthat?. Inaddition, theauthorreasonsthat ?(What’smore,he alsoassumesthat?)Atfirstglance,the author’sargumentappearstobesomewhat convincing,butfurtherreflectionreveals thattheconclusionisbasedonsomedubious assumptionsandthe reasoning is biaseddueto the inadequacy andpartiality in thenature of evidenceprovidedtojustifytheconclusion.Acarefulexaminationwouldreviewhowgroundlessthisconclusionis. （典）尾段模板 Toconclude, this argument isnotpersuasiveasitstands.Accordingly, it isimprudent forthe author to claim that?. Tomakethisargumentlogicallyacceptable, the author would haveto show that?. In addition, tosolidify the conclusion, the authorshould provide concrete evidence as welltodemonstratethat ?.Onlywithmore convincing evidence could this argument becomemorethan just anemotional appeal. （ 尾中复述的原由就 copy/paste 开中的原由） 高原由（按率由高到低排列） 序性因果攻Firstly, theauthoris engaged in ‘after this, therefore, becauseof this ’ reasoning. The line of reasoning is that becauseAhappenedbefore B,the former caused the latter. However,this reasoning is fallacious unless other possible causal factorshavebeenconsideredandruledout. Forexample,perhapsC.As a result, any decision aimedataddressingtheproblemof B mustbebasedonamorethorough investigation togatherdatainordertonarrowdownand locatetheactualcauseofB. 同时性因果攻击Secondly, the author’s solution rests onthe assumption that Ais the causeofBjustbecauseAcoincidedwithB. However,amerepositionalcorrelationdoes notnecessarilyproveacausalrelationship. Inaddition,allotherprospectivecausesof B,suchasCandD,mustberuled out. Without detailedanalysisoftherealsourceofB,it wouldbegroundlesstoattributeBtoA. 错误类比攻击Addition