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独立写作题目:Do you agree or disagree:young people
today are more likely to give time and effort to improve the
world than young people were in the past.
同意
问题核心:
什么促使年轻人去改变世界incentive
什么确保年轻人可以去改变世界foundation
分领域探讨:政治,经济,文化
政治开放——更有能力参与政治(民主投票等)——客观上更多的时
间在改进这个世界
经济发达——有较好的物质基础——通过经济手段改进世界(开公
司,增加就业)
受教育水平更高——有知识——自身更强大——改进世界
范文:
Nowadays people are having conflicting views about
whether young people today are more likely to give time and
effort to improve the world than young people were in the past.
Some people hold that young people today, due to a decline of
moral value, do not care about making the world a better place.
However, in my point of view, young people today are, indeed,
more likely to give time to improving the world.
Firstly, thanks to the development of science and technology,
young people today are able to receive more information about
worlds current situation and make a sound individual decision to
help those in need. It is hardly imaginable if people live, so to
say, fifty years ago. For example, one of my friends is currently
working in UN Volunteer, a subsidiary branch of UN in charge of
organizing international volunteer project. She told me that every
year, tens of thousands of young applicants are submitting their
interest in going to poor places and help those in need, and
most of them get their information about UN Volunteer projects
via their webpage. The technological development of our world
does enable young people to give more time to making the
world a better place.
Secondly, todays educational system has a stronger
emphasis on students extracurricular activities, such
volunteering work, entrepreneurial projects. Take China as an
example. Decades ago university curriculum had a stronger
emphasis on students intellectual ability, such as calculation and
interpretation. Recently experts and cou
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