2019高考英语作文牛师点评及满分范文汇总.docx

2019 高考英语作文牛师点评及满分范文汇总 全国Ⅰ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请 写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1 ．写信目的： 2．个人优势： 3 ．能做的事情。 1 ．词数 100 左右； 2 ．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．结束语已为你写好。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I m writing to apply for the position. The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form. All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Yours, Li Hua 【写作解析】 这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型， 可以按照申请信的思路来写， 同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。 首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。 第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来，文章用 First of all ，What s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡 性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。 最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。 全国Ⅱ卷 【题目要求】 假定你是校排球队队长李华。 请写封邮件告知你的队友 Chris 球队近期将参 加比赛，内容包括： 比赛信息； 赛前准备； 表达期待。 词数 100 左右； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 满分优秀范文】 Dear Chris, How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate. As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, w