高考英语复习读后续写练习：“寻物高手”：与伙伴寻找妈妈丢失的钻石戒指+课件.pptx

高考英语读后续写语篇练习《“寻物高手”：与伙伴寻找妈妈丢失的钻石戒指》1

题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2

Part1题目呈现3

续写原文ImFranklinG.Takata,betterknownas“Find-ItFrankie”duetomyexceptionaltrackingabilities.IwillsaythattheresnothingoutthereIcantfind.Iamfortunatetohavealoyalandskilledpartner,Munchy,bymyside.Hewasselectedespeciallyformefromananimalshelterbymyparentsontheoccasionofmyfifthbirthday.OneThursdayafternoon,MunchyandIwereplayinginthegardenwhenMomrevealedthathercherisheddiamondringhaddisappeared,entrustinguswiththetaskoflocatingit.HadIknownhowtrickythecasewouldbe,Imighthavethoughttwice.ButIsaidthenasIdsaytoday,“Iassureyouthattheresnothingwecantlocate!4

续写原文Wheneveranitemdisappears,myinitialinquirytoMomis,“Doyourecallthelastplaceyousawit?“Iwasoccupiedmakingcookiesinthekitchen,”Momreplied,“whenIremovedmyringandsetitonthecounter.However,aftertakingacallfromyouraunt,Ireturnedtodiscovertheringmissing!“Hmm.Well,itcouldnthavedisappearedallbyitself,Isaid.“Munchy,letsgotakeacloserlook.Munchyledthewaytothekitchen.Thecounterborenoindicationoftheringswhereabouts(下落);however,theflourbetrayedfaintpawprints,whichpointedtowardthecriminalsidentity.“Thecat”Isaid.“Mr.Jinglesmusthavebeenplayingwiththering,causingittodroptotheground!”Crawlingonthefloor,Isearchedhighandlowforthering.Myeffortswereinvain.5

段首句Paragraph1:“Munchy,youreup!GofindMr.Jingles.”__Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.6

Part2题目分析7

续写原文分析8富兰克林?G?高田因出色的追踪能力被称为“寻物高手弗兰基”，他有个忠诚又能干的伙伴芒奇。一个周四下午，他和芒奇在花园玩耍时，妈妈说她心爱的钻石戒指不见了，便委托他们寻找。弗兰基自信满满地答应下来。他询问妈妈最后一次看到戒指的地方，妈妈说在厨房做饼干时把戒指放在了柜台上，接了个电话回来就发现戒指不见了。弗兰基和芒奇来到厨房，柜台上没有戒指的踪迹，但面粉上有淡淡的爪印，指向了“嫌疑人”——猫金格斯先生。弗兰基认为金格斯先生可能在玩耍时把戒指弄到了地上，于是他在地板上四处寻找，却一无所获。

点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段