公开课课件——地点描写写作.ppt

Welcome to our city —ZhongMu .I am very delighted to introduce our beautiful city to you . ZhongMu is famous for garlic and watermelon . It lies in the center of Henna Province and between Zhengzhou and Kaifeng. It covers an area of 1416.6 square kilometers with a history of over 2,000 .The population of ZhongMu is 680,000 .ZhongMu has some famous places ,such as Yanming Lake, Greenery Theme Park, Fantawild Adventure Theme Park and so on. You can enjoy the sights and taste the local delicious food, such as hairy crab. Every year it attracts many visitors from all over the country. I’m sure you will have a good time here. Wellcome to Zhongmu Besides, Dear Mary, the convenient transportation here can make your visit more enjoyable. Your faithfully, Xiaohua How to introduce a place Position: lies in /on /to History：has a history of Area: has/covers an area of Population: has a population of Place of interest: Step5 Conclusion(2’) We can also use : Position: be located in/ on/ to History: With a history of The history of… is… Area: With an area of The area of… is… Population: With a population of The population of…is… [写作内容] 北京，位于中国东北部，是中国的首都，全国的政治、文化中心。 全市面积一万六千多平方公里，人口1400余万，是全国第二大城市。 夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥。 历史悠久，是旅游胜地，有很多著名文化古迹如紫禁城(Forbidden City)，颐和园，长城等。每年都吸引众多世界各地游客。 [写作要求] 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容; 2.介绍必须包括所有要点。 写作训练：请你用5句话介绍我国首都北京。 Try to finish your passage within 10 minutes. Pair work Exchange your composition with your desk mate and help each other to improve your writing. Task :Peer assessment Grade your partner’s composition according the following criteria , and underline both mistaken or confusing parts with “____” and excellent ones with” ~ ~ ~”． Criteria Marks Content（内容） ５　４　３　２　１ (是否包括所有提示要点, 是否用5句话表达全文） Language（语言） ８　７　６　５　４　３　２　１　０ (观点表达是否清晰、明确，句子是否得当) Coherence（连贯） ２　１　０ （是否用恰当的连词，副词，短语来衔接句子） [c