2025年剑桥商务英语BEC中级写作高分攻略与技巧.doc
BEC中级写作电子讲义
第三讲商务便函与便条
审題:
MrSmith,yourboss,toldyoutoaskMsLiutoattendasalespresentationonanewproduct.
WriteanotetoMsLiu:
*sayingwhowantshertoattendthesalespresentation;
*informingherwhenandwherethesalespresentationwillbeheld
有同学写成MrSmithtoldmetoaskwhowantstoattend
有同学写成PleasewriteanotetoMsLiuaskinghertoattendasalespresentation.
一定要把題目看清晰,再下笔写。
(一)商务便函
一般企业企业往往都印有按照自已企业风格的商业便函,請看下列例子:
Memo
To:(收信人)
From:(发信人)
Date:(曰期)
Subject:(事由)
Message:(正文)
大企业往往拥有許多分支机构,其商务便函信笺就包括较多的内容,如:
Memo
To:(收信人)
Company:(分企业)
Dept:(部门)
LocationExt:(地址与分机号)
Subject:
From:
Company:
Dept
LocationExt:
Date:
Message:
商务便函一般由如下几种部分构成:
1、Memo:Memo是Memorandum缩写,因此也可以用Memorandum,此外尚有InternalMemorandum和InterofficeMemorandum,其意思都是同样的。
2、To:这一标題背面应写收信人的姓名与职衔,姓名前可以用尊称或不用,如:
To:Mr.JohnSmith,SalesManager
3、From:这一标題后应写发信人的姓名与职衔:职衔可根据需要决定写或不写,但姓名前不要用尊称。
4、Date:曰期的写法同书信里曰期写法的规定完全同样,不要用数字来表达月份。
5、Subject:这一标題后是写事由的,既用一种或几种詞汇简朴概括便函的内容,以便查阅。事由必须简洁明了,不要用完整的句子,如:
ChangesinTravelAdvanceForm
PromotionofStaff
VacationSchedule
ParticipationinTrainingProgrammes
6、Message
商务便函还可以根据实际需要在末尾增長发信人的姓名首字母、附件、副本抄送等。
例
SCHOOLOFENGLISHFORBUSINESS
MEMORANDUM
To:Mr.Kingswick,CourseCoordinator
From:BarnsbyCampbel
Date:19November,1995
Subject:LessonPlanfor28NovemberLecture
Iintendtoteachmemowritinginmynextlecture.Iplantocoverthefollowingplans:
1.InsideAddress
Thisisomittedinamemo.Asinternalcommunicationthereasonisobvious.
2.Greeting
ItismerepolitetoputMr.,Mrs.orMsbeforeandtheofficeafterthenameoftherecipientYoumaysometimesaddressthereadersasagroup.
3.Subject
Thisisaphrasetotellthereaderwhatthememoisabout.SometimesonlythephraseisgivenwithoutthewordSubjectbeforeit.
4.Body
Theseshouldbeshort,lessthan10lines,andconcentrateononlyoneparagraphoneideaeach:Sometimesformemoswiththreeormoreparagra