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Wring Developing a good habit of writing A letter of seeking a job position/Cover letter Teaching aims Developing a good habit of writing Writing a letter of seeking a job position I 1).Factors that influence teachers’ scoring Contributing factors Dragging factors A.卷面美观 A.凌乱的书写 B.布局合理逻辑流畅 B.失衡的布局、无逻辑性 C.语言准确高大上 C.拼写、数、时态等低级错误 D.有思想表达形式丰富 D.平淡甚至错误的表达 2) Show some pictures of students’ writing II Errors in your writing: 1. 冠词使用错误2. 时态语态混用错误3. 句子成分残缺 4. 习惯搭配误用5. 名词单、复数不分6. 基本词汇拼写错误 7. 词性使用错误8. 标点符号与大小写错误 1. 冠词使用错误 (1 ) I am Li Hua, the middle school student from China. I am Li Hua, a chairman of the Students’ Union. 2.时态、语态混用 (1) I had learned English for 10 years. (2) The International Trade Fair will be hold in our city. (3) Our city will be hold the International Trade Fair. (4) I would be appreciate it if you give me the chance. 3.句子成分残缺 (1) So I writing this message to you. (2) I always watch English films and listen English songs. 4.习惯搭配误用 (1) I have a gift of English. (2) I’m interesting in this activity. 5.名词单、复数不分 (1) I am glad that you want some volunteer. (2) I get along well with my classmate. 6.基本词汇拼写错误 activity activities 活动 senior high school student 高中生 hold-held-held 举办、举行 will be held 将被举办 prize 奖品、奖项 price 价格 7.词性使用错误 (1) I can speak English fluent. (2) So I am sure that I can do the job good if I get this position. III Words and useful expressions Useful expressions 1. major in… 主修……专业 2. be qualified for… (可)胜任…… 3. have a good command/knowledge of精通 4. apply for 申请 5. get along well with…与……相处愉快 6. win the first prize 获得一等奖 7. be optimistic 对……乐观 8. meet your qualifications 满足你们的资历要求 9. have rich experience in… /be experienced in…在……方面有丰富的经验 10. broaden one’s vision/horizons开阔眼界/开阔视野 套用句式 1. 从你们的广告中得知你们正在招聘一名…… I learned