04道歉信——新高考英语应用文写作提分技能(模板+素材+策略).docx

新高考英语应用文写作提分技能 (模板+素材+策略) 类型模板之道歉信 (2016年，全国卷III）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示歉意； 2.说明原因； 3.另约时间。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】 Dear Bob, I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。 亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it’s convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富。 1.?道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话 I am writing this letter to express my regret… 我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾…… I am writing to apologize for… 我写信是为……道歉。 I would like to give you my apology for… 我想……向你道歉。 I am very sorry to say that… 我很抱歉…… I must apologize about (not) doing sth… 对于做了/没做……，我必须道歉。 Please accept my sincere apology for… 请接受我对于^的真诚道歉。 I am writing to say sorry for… 我写信是想对……说抱歉。 I am terribly sorry, but… 我很抱歉，但是…… 2.中间段：陈述理由+补救措施 陈述理由: 理由：I should have been able to attend your lecture, but due to the fact that something urgent happened, Ill have to take the place of my mother to pick my aunt up at the airport, whose flight happens to arrive on Saturday night. And its the first time that my aunt has returned to my hometown since she studied abroad several years ago. So I have no choice/option but to cancel the appointment with you. 我本应该参加你的讲座，但由于发生了紧急的事情，我要代替母亲到机场接我阿姨，她的航班在周六晚抵达，这是阿姨自从几年前去留学第一次回国。我别无选择只好取消和你的约会。 补救措施： 1.I want you to know how bad we feel about it