医学论文的英语摘要精要.ppt

1　 缺谓语 结果：共发生气胸 26例，出血 (包括肺内出血和针道出血 ) 48例。 错误： Results ：Pneumothorax 26 cases and bleeding ( including pulmonary and the path of needles) 48 cases . 改正： Results ：There occurred 26 cases of pneumothorax and 48 cases of bleeding ( including those from the lungs and the paths of needles) . 错误： 43 patients had been misdiagnosed before the diagnosis of DPB being made . 改正： . . . before the diagnosis of DPB was made . 错误： The ovarian teratoma can be considered if a ovarian tumor with fat component and calcification or ossification spots . 改正： . . . if an ovarian tumor has fat component and calcification or ossification spots . 2　 主谓安排不当或表达形式不对 错误： 3 cases with glomus jugulare tumor after were performed superselective arteriography to identify the diseased regions and feeding arteries under Seldinger technique . 改正： Superselective arteriography was performed in 3 cases with glomus jugulare tumor to identify . . . 错误： In 51 per cent of the test group and 14 percent of the control group respectively the oppression of brain stem by the vertebral basilar artery was found . 改正： The oppression of brain stem by the vertebral basilar artery was found in 51 percent of cases in the test group and 14 percent in the control group. 错误： Methods ： Reviewing the clinic documents of 20 patients before OLT and 13 after OLT， including . . . 改正： The clinical documents of 20 patients before OLT and 13 after OLT were reviewed， including . . . 回顾性分析病理证实 37例累及前颅窝底肿瘤，比较其影像学特点。 错误： 37 tumors involving anterior skull base were retrospectively analyzed their radiological features . 改正： 37 cases of tumor involving anterior skull base proved by pathology were retrospectively analyzed about their radiological features . (注：“主语 +被动谓语”后面不能接名词，应加介词作状语。 ) 错误：We compared the CTA results with DSA. 改正：We compared the results of CTA with those of DSA. 错误：We can use MRI combining with MRV as a common and primary method in examining venous sinus thrombosi