一篇成功申请哈佛大学Essay范文.doc.pdf

一篇成功申请哈佛大学 Essay 范文 一篇成功申请哈佛大学 Essay 范文 一一篇篇成成功功申申请请哈哈佛佛大大学学EEssssaayy范范文文 以下这篇 Admission Essay,就是当年 Sameer H. Doshi 申请哈佛大学时递 交的。他现在已成为一名律师。 （监审留学 专业留学文书写作 官方 QQ：970865017） Sameer 在美国的底特律长大，高中时他的随着家人移居加拿大。Sameer 有色盲和音盲这两个题目，他在他的申请短文时解释为什么对于他来说，他在烹 饪的创造表现能力是有限的。他在文中很清楚地表达了他在追求烹饪达到完美而 获得的快乐，而且在人生中他也会有同样的态度。 很多学生家长都问我，有没有申请短文的模板。我告诉他们，假如你想得到 一篇好的文章，就一定要学生写出自己的 Admission Essay。写好后，可以由高 手一起共同研究，琢磨如何修改。但一定不要全部让他人代劳。看看这位同学是 如何写的吧。 My aim is creation. I love the idea of giving life to nothingness. Were I another person in another time, I might spend my whole life tilling the land. Just like the earliest farmers, the sight of dirt giving rise to carrots and tomatoes at my whim feels like a miracle. I like to randomly burst out in song. I like to shake my body. If I could I would be a pianist and a poet and a painter and a politician. Unfortunately, in all these disciplines my ability cant meet my enthusiasm. Where I can create, and break tired codes, is in the kitchen. With unlimited time and resources I would become the best pastry baker and the finest chef in all of the eastern seaboard. I really like food. On some drab school days I cheer myself up thinking of the dinner awaiting me in the evening. Often I do a 24-hour fast to ready my stomach for a huge meal. Now, being served this food is fine. Its usually restful and rewarding to sit down after a long day to someone elses careful work, whether they be parents, grandmothers, or Little Caesar. But Ive noticed a dull glaze in the eyes of those who cook every night. Theyre doing it not to forge the uncreated conscience of their race, as a hungry James Joyce might say, but out of sometimes love and sometimes duty. I know cooks whose old standbys wow me every time, but they havent any pleasure in their labors. Care and duty are NOT why I want to explore food. I love the whole culinary process, from seedling to grocery to re