最新高考英语写作专题辅导课件–基础写作[项目描述].ppt

最后两句是表现iphone 4改善了的和新的功能, 因此范文中补充了两个细节with more powerful battery(第四句)和What is most amazing is that...(第五句), 使整个描述更有吸引力。 最近, 你的英国笔友Jack的学校开展了选修课, 他来信询问你校选修课的开展情况。请你根据以下提示, 写一封回信介绍你校选修课情况。包括以下内容要点： 开展时间 每周三下午4：00-5：00，一个学期 科目 1. 20门课程可供选择，包括中国文学简介， 电影鉴赏，书法等课程 2. 每学生可以报两门 作业 没有作业，鼓励学生大量阅读相关书籍 考试 论文方式 体会 有趣，开拓眼界，有意义 参考词汇：选修课 elective course书法 calligraphy [参考范文] Dear Bob， I am pleased to introduce to you the elective courses of our school. The elective courses are held from 4:00 to 5:00 in the afternoon every Wednesday, lasting a term. Every student can choose two subjects out of 20 according to their own interests, such as the Brief Introduction of Chinese Literature, the Appreciation of Movies, and Calligraphy. There is no homework for the elective courses, but students are encouraged to do a lot of related reading, which provides us with a platform for our development. No exams will be taken and instead students are required to write an essay. I like our selective courses because they are not only interesting and meaningful but also help to broaden my horizons. Yours， Li Hua [精华点评] 这篇文章的写作内容是以表格形式呈现, 表格的内容都是片段而不是完整的句子, 因此往往省略主语, 考生在写作时候要注意避免句子不完整。因此, 考生可以考虑使用被动语态, 如范文中使用了“The elective courses are held...”, “students are encouraged to do...”, “No exams will be taken...students are required to...”等。 * 林辉 * * 林辉 * 林辉 * * 林辉 * 林辉 * 相关短语 1. originate as... 以……出现/起源 2. a means of survival 一种生存手段 3. develop into 发展成为 4. be allowed to 被允许 5. grow steadily 稳定增长 6. twice in history 历史上两次 7. participate in 参加；参与 8. is considered to be(as)被认为是 9. what is more 此外 10. offer sb. help 给某人提供帮助 11. be similar to 与……相似 12. choose two subjects out of... 从……中选 择两个科目 13. earn its status as a sport 作为一项运动 取得它的地位 14. related reading materials 相关的阅读材料 15. broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野 16. provide sb. with a platform 给某人提供 一个平台 相关句式 1. Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.射击, 原先是一种生存手段, 只是到了十九世纪晚期才发展成一种运动项目。 2. Women