上海高考英语作文要求及评分标准.doc

写好高考英语作文的关键动笔之前，首先必须针对提示的文字或图片认真审题，然后组织内容，构思提纲，理顺思路，切忌想到哪里就写到哪里，一定要避免累赘繁琐、条理不清，重点不突出的情况发生。1.?????? 注意语言规范，注意正确用词用句，强调使用课本上学到的单词、词组和佳句，保证文章简洁通顺，切忌使用冷僻的单词，特别是必须使用不规范的中文式表达，尽量不要翻来覆去地使用已用过的词汇、句型和句子。2.?????? 正确判断时态，语态的应用，不能交叉混杂，随意乱用。3.?????? 注意单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等正确性，避免不必要的失误；注意句子中人称主谓与时态的一致性。4.?????? 考试时，尽量注意书写端正和卷面整洁。一、记叙文的写作要领记叙文按内容大致可分为“记实”和“描写”两大类型。前者在讲清事件本身，只要根据提示叙述清楚即可，无需太多的描写或表达个人的感受。后者则重在描写细节，围绕时间、地点、人物及事件的起因、经过和结果来展开，应该有个人的感受和看法。与汉语的记叙文类似，写英语记叙文时也要注意正确分段（分层次）。开头句（topic sentence）要有新意，否则变成了翻译句子。结尾句（concluding sentence）要能首尾呼应，并有升华主题之效果。在正确分层次的基础上，紧扣主题展开叙述，详略要得当，千万不能离题。记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文用各种时态。在行文时，避免重复使用同一动词。在无法避免时，可用该动词的近义词或相应的词组来代替，使文章更生动。使用直接引语也是记叙文的一个特点，但须慎用，不可太多。此外，可选择以第一或第三人称来展开叙述，以达到更好的效果。要注意运用课文所学过的词语或句型，以减少错误。范文1I myself cannot remember how many tests I have taken in the past ten years. But one test, which is still kept in my mind, was the first English exam on the first day right after I entered senior high school.I clearly remembered that I entered the classroom before 8 o’clock, and didn’t come out until the bell rang. When I began to do one part after another, I found that the test paper was much more difficult than ever. In grammar, there were so many complicated sentences and in vocabulary there were so many strange words and phrases that I couldn’t be sure whether my choice for every item was correct or not. The result was, of course, that no one passed the exam. Later I knew that my school was ready to invite some foreign teachers to teach us English. Therefore, we should have a general knowledge of English.Two months later, an Australian teacher came to teach us. I have forgot how long and what he taught us even though he was kind and generous----no one could fail in any of his tests. But the first English test in my senior grade cannot be easily forgotten for ever.?范文2Last Sunday night, my parents would attend a party. They asked me to go with them. For me it was more a good lesson than a party. Still now I think it’s an unforgettable party that I had