2016高三英语试卷讲评.ppt

1、Having a laptop is an award for freshmen, which will encourage them to study harder in the university. 2、It is convenient for them to look for information on the Internet whenever they want and wherever the are. 3、A laptop costs a lot of money, which will add financial burden to some families. 4、Many universities offer adequate computers to the students for use. 高分作文的特点： 注意体现（1全+5美） 一、要点全 二、五个美 1、外在美（字体、卷面） 2、结构美（段落、层次） 3、词汇美（词汇、短语） 4、句式美（长短句结合） 5、过渡美（句段的衔接） 本次作文的问题 没做到： 1）词汇美 2）句式美 Dear Tom, How are you doing? I know you are interested in the topic whether it is necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university. Here, I’d like to tell you something about it. When it comes to this topic, people’s opinions differ. Some people are in favor of it. First of all, freshmen deserve a laptop as an award for their great efforts and achievements. In addition, having a laptop in hand will bring more convenience to their studies and they can have easier access to the Internet, which will in turn benefit them. However, others hold opposite opinions. Their reasons are as follows. For one thing, it will add the financial burden to some families. For another, many universities are equipped with adequate computers for use. Personally speaking, it is unnecessary to buy a laptop for freshmen. They may be addicted to computer games, which will have bad effects on their studies. That’s all. If you have any questions, please let me know. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua One possible version（范文） Dear Tom, How are you doing? I know you are interested in the topic whether it is necessary for freshmen to have a laptop when they go to university. Here, I’d like to tell you something about it. When it comes to this topic, people’s opinions differ. Some people are in favor of it. First of all, freshmen deserve a laptop as an award for their