作文评讲 online shopping.ppt

2011,6CET4 作文评讲 Online shopping 　 1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, online shopping has gained great popularity among an increasing number of users. For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like Taobao, EBay and Alibaba. It goes without saying that online shopping is beneficial to customers and retailers alike in more than one way. For consumers, it is time- and energy-saving to purchase whatever they want on the Internet at a much lower price. For retailers, they can save lots of costs that are originally used to rent a store in the downtown and pay employees for less salary compared with traditional market sale. However, despite the many benefits brought by online shopping, there are still some defects that cannot be ignored. For one thing, lack of face-to-face communication makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. For another, some merchants with evil motives may provide false information, which makes it time-consuming to identify the commodity. From my perspective, the benefits of online shopping outweigh its defects, and to refuse to eat for fear of choking is always an unwise choice. One of the effective measures is to carry out relevant laws to regulate the online trading activities.? Only when a harmonious Internet environment is established can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping. 辩证观点：趋利避害 As far as I am concerned, its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. We should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. 号召呼吁：解决办法 Therefore, a dozen of measures are supposed to be taken to prevent X from bringing us more harm. First,… Second… 预测展望 Only in that case/way will we definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___. 亮点回顾 在越来越多的…受到欢迎 Become popular among more and more … Gain great